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Phil Young’s English School · Sheet 8 of 11

Modifiers and comparison

Every word here is spelled correctly and every form exists. What goes wrong is position — a phrase that attaches to the wrong noun, a comparison that never finishes, an intensifier on an adjective that cannot take one. Twelve patterns below, then thirty exercises.

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The twelve patterns

A modifier attaches to whatever sits nearest it. If that is the wrong word, the sentence says something you did not mean.

1 · Dangling participles
Having reviewed the proposal for three weeks, the vote was postponed.
Having reviewed the proposal for three weeks, the committee postponed the vote.

An opening participial phrase attaches to the subject that follows it, so that subject must be the thing doing the action. In the faulty version the vote reviewed the proposal. The repair is almost always to change the main clause, not the phrase: give the sentence a subject that can perform the action. Watch for this after having, while, after, before, when + -ing.

2 · Only, almost, nearly, even, just
The department only approved two of the twelve applications.
The department approved only two of the twelve applications.

These words modify whatever comes immediately after them, and moving one moves the meaning. Only the department approved two, the department only approved two and the department approved only two are three different claims. Put the word directly in front of what it limits.

3 · Phrases and clauses go next to what they modify
The professor returned the essays to the students that contained numerous errors.
The professor returned the essays that contained numerous errors to the students.

A relative clause modifies the noun immediately before it, so a clause stranded at the end of a sentence latches onto the wrong noun. Read what the sentence literally says — here, that the students contained the errors — and move the clause up against the noun it belongs to.

4 · Squinting modifiers
The instructor told the students after the exam they would receive feedback.
The instructor told the students that after the exam they would receive feedback. · After the exam, the instructor told the students they would receive feedback.

A modifier sitting between two things it could modify leaves the reader unsure which is meant: did the telling happen after the exam, or the feedback? Adding that forces it forward; moving the phrase to the front forces it back. Either fix works — leaving it ambiguous does not.

5 · Comparative for two, superlative for three or more
The most detailed of the two proposals was the one submitted in June.
The more detailed of the two proposals was the one submitted in June.

Two items take the comparative, three or more take the superlative. The signal is usually a few words away — of the two, between them, both — so read past the adjective before deciding. The same split governs better / best, less / least and latter / last.

6 · Never double a comparative
The revised version is more easier to follow than the draft.
The revised version is easier to follow than the draft. · It is more accessible than the draft.

Use -er or more, never both, and the same for -est and most. The error usually appears in a list where the earlier items were formed correctly, which is what makes it easy to read past.

7 · Forming the comparative
The team needs farther evidence before it can publish.
The team needs further evidence before it can publish. · The village is farther from the coast than the town.

One syllable takes -er (larger, shorter); three or more take more (more significant); two syllables go either way, with -y words taking -er (easier, happier). The irregulars: good / better / best, bad / worse / worst, little / less / least, much / more / most, and the split between farther for physical distance and further for degree or addition.

8 · Complete the comparison
The new method is as reliable than the one it replaced.
The new method is as reliable as the one it replaced. · It is as efficient as, if not more efficient than, the original.

As pairs with as; more and -er pair with than. Mixing them is the commonest version. The subtler one is the compressed double comparison: as good as, if not better than needs both halves complete, because as good, if not better than leaves the first comparison unfinished.

9 · Proportional and multiple comparisons
The department received twice more applications this year than in 2019.
The department received twice as many applications this year as in 2019. · The larger the sample, the more reliable the estimate.

Multiples use twice / three times as many … as, never twice more … than. Proportional pairs need the before both comparatives: the larger … the more reliable, not larger … more reliable.

10 · Adjective order
a Chinese small blue vase
a small blue Chinese vase

When several adjectives stack before a noun, English fixes their order: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose. Native speakers never learn this consciously but notice instantly when it is broken. Two or three adjectives is the practical limit before the sentence should be rewritten.

11 · Absolute adjectives
The manuscript was very complete and required no revision.
The manuscript was complete and required no revision. · The approach is almost unique in the field.

Some adjectives name an absolute state and cannot be graded: complete, unique, perfect, impossible, equal, fatal, final, universal. Something is not more perfect or very unique. Words of approach — almost, nearly, virtually — are acceptable where words of degree are not.

12 · Do not split a verb from its object
She speaks well English in meetings.
She speaks English well in meetings. · She speaks fluent English.

An adverb of manner cannot sit between a verb and its direct object. Put it after the object, or before the verb. Frequency adverbs behave differently: they go before the main verb but after be and after an auxiliary — she often attends, she is often late, she has often argued.

Set A · Choose the correct form

Questions 1–12. Tap the version that says what the sentence means to say.

Set B · Find the error

Questions 13–22. Four parts of each sentence are underlined. Tap the one that is wrong. Only one contains an error.

Set C · Correct the sentence

Questions 23–30. Each sentence contains exactly one misplaced or malformed modifier — and at least one other that is already correct. Find the error, write the correction, and name the pattern behind it. Write your version in your notebook, then reveal the correction and compare.

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